Showing posts with label Week 5. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Week 5. Show all posts

Thursday, March 10, 2016

Thoughts about Comments:

It is overwhelming to read all the comments. I feel good when someone enjoys my writing. I want to thank you all for your support and appreciation with your comments.
For me, the comments pointing out the mistake and correcting it in the comment section is most helpful. English being my second language, I have so many to learn about it and sometimes I cannot figure out the mistake even after proofreading it. Some comments with correction with the punctuations were also of a great help.
After reviewing my comments I feel like I have not been leaving a comments with a feedback to improve. I most of the time only comment about what I liked about the blog post. In my future comments for others I would definitely try to point out the mistakes and improvements that can be done in their blog post.

This video always makes me happy :)



Constructive Feedback

Monday, February 22, 2016

Week 5 Extra Credit Reading: Rouse Part A



The story in this reading part A of the Rouse were very interesting. I like the part in a hypocritical cat, where the cat pretends to be doing a noble act and stands on one foot facing towards the sun. When the rats who thought he was a noble cat and came to worship him, he grabbed and ate the last rat. But he couldn’t continue this drama because he gets caught by the chief of the rats. He ended up dead after he tried to snap the chief of the rat. The other interesting story that caught my eyes was the Pious wolf. He gets stuck on the top of a big rock surrounded by water with no food. So he pretends to fast because he had no food anyways. But, when the fairy comes to examine him for the validity of his fasting he fails and he gets a punishment of being trapped there to fast for a whole week. For me, the whole theme of the stories that I read was to be of a good heart. We should act, work only when we meant it to from deep inside our heart. If we are just faking what we are doing, the end results are not good. Do it from your heart, be true and speak the truth. Doing stuff just to look noble in the eyes of others and having a different thoughts in your mind is not a good act at all. Even in the story of the Crocodile and the monkey, the crocodile tries to act like he wanted to help the monkey cross the river to the other side where there were more foods, and having a different idea in his mind, that is to eat the monkey’s heart. The crocodile ended up making a fool out of himself. So to sum up, work from your heat, be pure minded and don’t foul play on someone else because you will end up getting hurt, making a fool out of yourself and even die because of your act.
A Cat                                                         


                                                    Source: A hypocritical cat





Week 5 Reading Diary: Extra Credit, Rouse Part A
Title of the book : The Giant Crab, and Other Tales from Old India
Author: W.H.D.Rouse
Year: 1897

Thursday, February 18, 2016

Week 5 Storytelling: The Five Neighbors in the midst of Mahabharata

The Five Neighbors in the midst of Mahabharata
 ** This story begins on a balcony in the fifth floor of Dest’s house. She is talking to Reg, who is walking down the road towards the Hastinapur Palace**
Dest: ** in loud voice** Reg, did you hear about it?
Reg: ** looks around searching for the voice** who is it? Where are you?
Dest: Reg, it is me, Dest. Here in the balcony.
Reg: ** looking up in the balcony** yes, Dest. What are you talking about?
Dest: I am talking about Pandava brothers. Did you not!!!
Reg: I have no clue on what you have to say. Why don’t you come down?
** Wej lives just opposite to where Dest’s house is located. He comes up to his window because of the loud conversation that was going on **
Wej: What is this noise coming from? Are you guys out of your mind I am trying to see the news.
Dest: Wej, come down to my garden. I will give you all the news that you have been waiting for, you don’t have to watch the news.
** Both Dest and Wej walks down to the garden where Reg was waiting for them**
Wej: Okay, what is the news?
Dest: So, you guys haven’t heard about what happened in the Palace.
Reg: I told you earlier, I don’t know. Why don’t you just tell us?
Dest: So the Kaurava brothers invited Pandava brothers over to the palace today for the grant party. Then they started to gamble.
Reg: Who are they?
Wej: Shakuni and Yudhishthira?
Dest: Exactly.
Reg: I think I know what the result of this is. Shakuni is a magician and has power to manipulate the dice.
Dest: Wait, What???
Wej: Did you not know about Shakuni’s ability to manipulate the dice?
Dest: No, not at all. Wow, it all makes sense now. I was thinking that Yudhishthira is a very unlucky person till now.
Reg: So, I am thinking Yudhishthira lost some of his jewels in this gambling?
Dest: No, Reg. It is more than that!
Wej: So he lost some horses with it?
Dest: No
Wej: He lost everything?
Dest: Yes, he lost everything. Horses, jewels and all his belongings.
Reg: Om Nama shivaya! This is such a bad news. I was on my way to the palace to have some good time. But, with all this I don’t feel like going there anymore. Kaurava brothers are the bad omen to our Hastinapur. They should leave the Palace and let Pandava brothers be our king.
** Yuva and Buk runs into the garden; they are the other Neighbors of Dest who lives in the same community**

Yuva: Guys, Yudhishthira is stupid. He just became a slave.
Reg: what???
Dest: The black clouds are shining over our head right now. What are you talking about?
Buk: Yudhishthira just lost himself in the gambling and became the slave of Kaurava brothers.
Wej: No way!
Yuva: Not only that he then lost Draupadi too and now the Kaurava brothers are trying to strip her naked in front of everyone.
Dest: No way! We cannot let this happen. Let us go and protest in front of the palace.
Reg: Yes, we should. Let’s go.
Yuva: We have to hurry up!!!
Buk: Let’s go!!!
Wej: Let’s run.
** The story ends with all of the five characters running towards the palace to protest against the Kaurava brothers ***





Gossip
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Author’s Note:
This week I have decided to write a story with Neighborhood gossip style. I believe whatever happened in the story of Mahabharata had a lot of people talking about in the neighborhood. I thought this would be a great story to show what people living in the same era thought about all the situations that took place in the Palace. This will put out the facts about what people did and how they acted during when the story took place. I am also choosing the script style in the story, that way I can place more than one character in the story and have their voices heard. There are a lot of events that takes place in Mahabharata, Duryodhana the eldest of the Kaurava brothers was very jealous of Pandava brothers in any way that you can think about. Duryodhana tried to kill Bhima, burned the house of Pandava brothers and then plotted a gambling match to take away all the possessions of Pandava brothers. In this story I am focusing on the gambling part in this story. During the gambling, Duryodhana and Shakuni plots a dice match with eldest Pandava brother, Yudhishthira. They take away all his possessions including horses, jewels and eventually even his own self and then his wife Draupadi. Then the Kaurava brother proceeds to strip Draupadi naked in front of all the people.  People must have heard about what happened inside the palace that day. But the story fails to tell us about the people beside the one in the palace and the main characters of Mahabharata.

Bibliography:
Title: PDE Mahabharata
Year of Publication:  1921